Cancer Discussions, Cancer Support and Community Connection Forum - November 11th, 2009 - 5 Comments
do you know anyone with/ who has survived cancer? need hope? need to know more?
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this video gives inspiration hope and education of cancer
i made it in honor of my cousin. when she was little she had radiation treatment for cancer. the doctors said that cancer could re-develope at a certain age – shes at that age now so i made this
please give me your opinion on it – could you rate or comment it?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WEiH7byfNkc


You made the video out of love, so how can anybody find fault with that?
But here are some ideas..when you take higher classes in English your professors will stress the need to always edit your final paper. I know you are working a video but it essentially is a paper that informs and as one could be revised.
I would:
Stress the need for people that support cancer. (I would include people volunteering on "cancer walks") isn’t there a big one in your area this weekend for breast cancer?
I would use some of the telethon video that was filmed for national broadcast recently. Without violating infringement laws.
Personally I would like to see where you mention that people die of cancer…a graveyard in the background.
For hope a dove flying.
I would have a fast sequence of different faces (200 within 30 seconds) that would show the different races, ages, of people that could get cancer.
I would show young people fighting cancer ( pictures of children in hosipital).
I would call for a demand of action. What every good paper does.
You have a good video, with work it can be a great video.
As is….it is fine. But like a paper it could be worked on to be something greater.
wow that is amazing you are such a good person and im sure youre a huge inspiration to your cousin. it was amazing. great video, great info, great graphics. overall amazing. thanks for showing your cancer support. god bless you!
That was a really nice video. I just found out this Fathers day that my mother had liver Cancer. Were all still trying to deal with it all. everything is happening and changing so quickly and my dad has to take care of her and she had to do chemo twice a week. The video really touched me and I am so glad you made it for your cousin. Thanks!
That’s…such a beautiful video. My grandpa died from cancer 5 yrs ago and my mom STILL gets upset about it. That really touched me. My mom’s friend had breast cancer, had a mastectomy, and is in full recovery, so yes, there’s hope.
My husband had part of his lung removed and part of his stomach and liver so far so good. the CAT scans have come back clear.A positive outlook and strong will help in many ways. Prayer and loving friends and family.